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(Untitled) (Free verse) by LuckyJoe

Dance with the wind, Lead me on like the breeze, Set to each blade of grass, Freeze lightly cover heart with dew, Each beat, crack this thin layer. Run fingers through hair, Autumns rain falling without a care, Soothing with each caress of follicle, On end stand, Excited by the touch so inviting. Internal flame spreading, Slowly crawling upon ground, Surrounding obstacles in the way, Burn forever consuming soul, Soothing warmth never to be scorn, Words of beauty sworn truth. Eat the days one by one, Never indulge to your fill, Sit around the table forever talk, Starve for the dawning day, Watch the dusking, another one to rest.

Mr Pig 8-Sep-03/1:19 PM
Not a bad effort at all, last line lover.7




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