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Why (Free verse) by J.B. Manning

The way I see So deeply Inside my own mind The absence of space And time Gently pressing Teasing testing Daring me to find Whatever it may be That motivated me To find the line between The words you’ve yet to speak Your love is all I seek And yet I’m sick with grief My heart was ripped out by a thief Questioned by an unknown source Pushed forth by some unknown force Braced against an unlocked door Labeled as a worthless whore In the corner where I weep I close my eyes and pray for sleep When dreams they come and rescue me I’m one and free within my dream Until I wake and want to scream For all the things that I have seen And wondered all the days gone by A single question in my mind WHY GOD WHY!

J.B. Manning 8-Sep-03/10:31 AM
Joe's just pissed cuz I dissed his weak ass poetry. That and he hates men who like sex with men because he confuses it with his father having sex with him. Not the same thing Joe, sorry. Get over it, it's in the past...move on...you're special...REALLY. No body thinks less of you for enjoying your fathers questing interest in you. :-)




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