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The empty room (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

I was invited to heaven and saw Jesus there. He held his face in his hands, he was sobbing. Gray and matted was his hair. I said: "Jesus? What is wrong?" He said: "I don't know, nobody stays." And then he sent me away.

Bill Z Bub 7-Sep-03/7:21 PM
Changing comes to stays makes all the difference. Brava, signore! (Forget babelfish, I'm learning Italiano)




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