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The Disease Of The Dancing Cats (Free verse) by Mister Cakes

Midnight When everyone goes to sleep The streets are empty This is when the cats come out They dance under the moonlight They form a society They have rules Until the break of day When man returns And the cats become domesticated again And they lap up milk again And they wait for midnight

horus8 28-Jul-02/5:35 PM
this is minus drunk old man. lacking walled up cat. no insanity. no death. weak society. no poe. no poo. no allen with rabies in gutter. no black cat. no descriptive action. go read weak beak. come back one week ( i suggest hermen hesses' steppenwolf and richard adams shardic. then you have midnight and milk (in a story a bit more prose mad mix poem) better society. anarchy, last sunset ranch.e




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