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30,000 feet (Free verse) by Patsy

i am unanointed jetting through limbo and only your intersections mark. Your lights, my stars cities: nebulae i am in love with the beauty of your ignorance, i am wishing you could see me hanged not unlike a comdemned toy a strawflower protection against the evil eyes a spector spectator sport.

EAger to Offend 5-Sep-03/1:36 AM
I dig this, having just got off a plane a few days ago. Like "Recycle", I figure I'm probably missing something but, I'll give it another read soon.




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