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Severed (Free verse) by shadowaura

My eyes wax dim [From your hollow truths] And the screams within Fade [to silence] My breath is corrupt ...Tainted [with rust] And I keep hoping Hatred will bow [to love] [In this beautiful abyss] [Of immortal anguish] You can hear me Praying [for solace] Father, I love you I love you, Mother.. My soul aches [To see you severed] I cannot bear these Callused emotions Syncopated symphonies And endless tears [Of your broken matrimony] T.J.L age 14

Thissitestinks 4-Sep-03/6:36 PM
Very vivid imagery! Well done. :)




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