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Driftwood (Other) by GekoHawaii

She drifts from me O'er oceans deep Now lost without a sail I cry to her Only to learn She does not hear my hail My darling love of Angels flame Will live forever more Not in me, nor by my side But on an unknown shore I gave you all Broke down the wall That held you back from joy And now you run What's done is done I'm no more than a toy My darling love of Angels flame Will live forever more Not in me, nor by my side But on an unknown shore I love you though 'spite what I know About that mask you wear I pray you die With a lucky guy Who's name you're proud to bare My darling love of Angels flame Will live forever more Not in me, nor by my side But on an unknown shore So now I'm all alone Doomed always to roam For love, new life, a home And one to call my own

tadpole 4-Sep-03/4:09 PM
oh man, I really like this one, I'll have to read more of yours




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