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The Banishment of Don Quixote (Free verse) by abecedarian

Lance broken windmill shattered a bloody pool of innocence and Don Quixote cleaning his blade - his cleft tongue newly born of a snake's taste for blood Cervantés' head held upright by the only hand that remains true, for the other has just committed an act no author can leave unpunished - its dignity and honor as false as the face of romance is to its nature. There is now only murder as the pen, dragged too deep i' the page in passion destroys all beauty and substance therein a depreciated legacy left forever unmended as Cervantés surrenders his quill to oblivion and stumbles away.

SupremeDreamer 4-Sep-03/12:35 AM
drunk, two nights ago. i spray painted some expensive cars. last fuck was 3 weeks ago.. swimming, well, i tried to drown myself in a bucket yesterday.

No worries though, my "mob solution" has been tossed for a more stubborn, persistent approach, that slowly, but surely, slammed my point through.

I dont mind that he wants to make me think.. i just mind when folks become so brave and then do not wish to go the distance, resigning themselves to calm defense, i get all.. qwerky..

in other words, if its labeled "Coke" and i suddenly get "pepsi" the checkout clerk will suffer. oh well. its in the past now.




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