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none (Free verse) by tadpole

I am proud I congradulate my sorry self inside No one knows My persona displays humility of mind I detest it Ever endeavoring to be rid of it I am aware True confidence I crave The source of which I found is actually near I'm not so bad I think to myself in silence I am wrong Left alone my nature's capable of every kind of violence

tadpole 3-Sep-03/4:07 PM
yeah it was kinda rushed, thanks for the honesty. . .about doing better, I just wrote it to put something on here since it wasn't fair for me to comment on everyone's without them having a chance to comment or rip on mine. . .I don't know if I'll write anymore




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