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The Banishment of Don Quixote (Free verse) by abecedarian

Lance broken windmill shattered a bloody pool of innocence and Don Quixote cleaning his blade - his cleft tongue newly born of a snake's taste for blood Cervantés' head held upright by the only hand that remains true, for the other has just committed an act no author can leave unpunished - its dignity and honor as false as the face of romance is to its nature. There is now only murder as the pen, dragged too deep i' the page in passion destroys all beauty and substance therein a depreciated legacy left forever unmended as Cervantés surrenders his quill to oblivion and stumbles away.

DreamerSupreme 3-Sep-03/10:33 AM
yeah, sure, its layed in subtle veils. bullshit. you offer nothing to clue anyone in on what your trying to say.

its all just the readers being too lazy to figure it out abe.. isnt it? your a fruit boy that is not very succesful at selling his fruit, because theres so many other fruit sellers.. yeah, your self love and "im so brilliant" thought process has turned you into goo. i had this problem once too, i got my head caved in afterwards.

it was an unpleasant way to wake up.




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