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The empty room
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INTRANSIT
I was invited to heaven and saw Jesus there. He held his face in his hands, he was sobbing. Gray and matted was his hair. I said: "Jesus? What is wrong?" He said: "I don't know, nobody stays." And then he sent me away.
SupremeDreamer
3-Sep-03/5:42 AM
oh yeah, "nobody comes" should be:
nobody stays.
because you did go there.. but were sent away... z mentioned that.. bleh.
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