poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The empty room by INTRANSIT.

INTRANSIT3 Sep 2003

I can dig the comma. I wanted (hair) to rhyme with (there),I was trying a more subtle rhyme with this. I see what you're saying though. I'll play with it.

Oh looky! No more onesies-twosies! I must be gaining the respect of someone with pertinance. Ha! OW! damn that coffee's hot!