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Not Real (Free verse) by DeadtotheWorld

Hate has raged upon me for too long I've come to release this anger and doldrums Destructive tantrums thrown for no reasons The flowers now bloom on the wrong seasons Darkness and Sorrow glistens in the shadows Of non morbid tones of plateau's Things should not be this way It's all screwed to this day Feeling pain and agony Wanting to take out everyone With this bullets and this gun Crazy and Insane is what they said But It seems fine to me, because now their dead

DeadtotheWorld 27-Aug-03/10:15 PM
This poem is about things that are happening and in which they should be the opposite of what is actucally happening, Hince the name "Not Real."




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