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Laundry Day (Free verse) by impert&ent

What’s the difference between a sheet and a phone call? They both hang off a line A means of entangling ourselves In every desire. Along the canal I see you White semaphores in hand Telling me something I don’t understand In the language of fishes Dragonfly wings Reflections on the water Bullrushes whispering Sheets between us Along the line Your silhouette I wrap myself, laughing and spinning.

INTRANSIT 26-Aug-03/6:34 AM
Change the opener. I think the rest is great.

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