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Laundry Day (Free verse) by impert&ent

What’s the difference between a sheet and a phone call? They both hang off a line A means of entangling ourselves In every desire. Along the canal I see you White semaphores in hand Telling me something I don’t understand In the language of fishes Dragonfly wings Reflections on the water Bullrushes whispering Sheets between us Along the line Your silhouette I wrap myself, laughing and spinning.

richa 26-Aug-03/4:38 AM
unconventional way to use analogy in the first line.
Sets a frivolous tone.

you repeat sheets in the final verse which is unneeded.
The jump to second verse is less than seemless.

other than that ace -8-

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