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Halves (Free verse) by impert&ent

Give up some words, petal. Let them drift casually through your fingers. Let them go. On the palm of slight breezes. I’ve witnessed a few births But not my own. Imago mundi Your face in the sun. A crown of rays The flower of creation. Who knows what a mother feels As she watches a daughter Some part of herself Slipping casually Into the world and through her fingers.

<~> 25-Aug-03/7:12 PM
halves severs it. but maybe you meant to?

other than that, no beef from me.




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