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The Better of the Sea (Free verse) by abecedarian

Diesel fumes had weeks ago given way to an imposed and permanent silent drifting whose own mephitic lullabye repels all surprise. I slept bell after bell Rope after rope Fish after fish In my dirty cotton hammock Twelve knots of repair Mark my time away from home My boredom often permits a daydream where those same knots are no longer in my hammock but under the waters surface being dragged in our wake But by St. Osmund's testicles tonight that hammock got the better of the sea - knots undone, it dropped my rusting ass to the deck! And now as I look out over the water I swear I feel a breeze

abecedarian 24-Aug-03/9:41 PM
- How the context of situtations affects our perception of them.
(Noxious diesel fumes vs./ being stranded)
(Getting dropped on your ass vs./ being bored)

-How humour often arises under odd circumstances
-And a small preachy bit about how situtations are mostly what we make of them.




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