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quarter-step (abridged) (Free verse) by richa

the missing quarter-step makes the waltz. what want would make it a march? Just us.

richa 24-Aug-03/3:32 AM
never said I preferred a waltz to a march.
The first line is saying waltz is a march missing something.
And therefore must be fixed.

the poem is about skewed logic of us, our vision of the world.




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