Caducus23 Aug 2003

As always your writing intrigues. I had a problem with line 2 its a bit of a flow killer.

However the way you used lizard was good, though they tend to turret their eyes other than move due to their prey instict. The best for me was where you went with the message and your strength for me has always been that you have a strong beginning, middle, and end, a depth in words yet with a clarity of expression.

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