poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Aphrodite (edited) by Caducus.

<~>22 Aug 2003

cad--nice first try. but. why. do. you. insist. on. writing. with. a. different. voice. than. the. one. you. speak. with., just. because. it's. a. sonnet???

see how fucking annoying that is?

don't try to be so noble. tell me about her breats, and how they mounded up, wet and lustrous, like pearls. tell me about the tangle of arame that dresses her..erm, 'cavern'... tell me about the sand in your crotch.

that's what i want to hear.