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Undertow (Haiku) by eliastemplar

turn off all the lights beneath the cold that covers your only summer

<~> 22-Aug-03/10:50 AM
technically it is. virtually it is. actually it is.
and if you thought for a second about it, you'd agree it's powerful.

knowing you're in the service, eliastemplar, this poem evokes service on a submarine. i know how long those guys/women are gone for, and the blackness between news.

nice job, sir.




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