poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Undertow by eliastemplar.

<~>22 Aug 2003

technically it is. virtually it is. actually it is.
and if you thought for a second about it, you'd agree it's powerful.

knowing you're in the service, eliastemplar, this poem evokes service on a submarine. i know how long those guys/women are gone for, and the blackness between news.

nice job, sir.