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walk out (Free verse) by NNirvana13666

Enter my world of unstructured confusion Bask in my frustration I have yet to see the person I so devotedly worked to be Worship the air I breathe Fall into this hellish hypnosis and die the moment you choose to leave The world is willing to die for the death of a nation Never willing to end the suffering of the mind Patriotic roars overpower liberal chants Life is a path taken for granted by man Chances passed up in the past Silenced by the political iron fist of mayhem Swift is the ray of light that blinds Superpower let us free Stop zealously controlling our lives

<~> 22-Aug-03/10:46 AM
13666--yeah there's a lot of crap here. just like everywhere. and there's good stuff too. as for yours being good? i'd call it self-servingly nascent.




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