<~>21 Aug 2003

nice build-up. i especially like "sweat so sweet that sour seems discreet".

typo: steel, not steal, right?

also: "Pain
Sparks
In my mind
Lightly slightly
Stimulates
And separates
Us from them"

who is us and who is them? gay/straight? something else? maybe it doesn't need to be explained, because this is about the heat, and i'm not wearing my inflammable cat suit tonight.

oh well.