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Learning Self
(
Free verse
) by
nentwined
meaning begins with self for that is. a seed in the void -- learning the self leads to others, lines turn to webs; learning others leads to self, seed turns to flower; websoil conducts being, meaning is in the entangled souls.
anonymous
7-Aug-01/1:14 PM
I like how the repetition of words mirrors the imagery of the poem-- and it's a neat summary of the social dynamic of the internet, as well. Nicely written!
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