SupremeDreamer21 Aug 2003

it has nothing to do with the fact that he didnt write about flowers and happy thoughts.. not many here do.. because thats been fucking done 20000 millions times..

Nah, its because this poem is cliche, crappy, not well formed or constructed, and FAILS utterly to provide anything of value to the reader.

and man, look at what this person posted... THERES NOT AN INKLING OF HOPE. joejoe has more chances at enhancing his talent, since even his shit is alot better than this.. pfft.