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quarter-step (abridged) (Free verse) by richa

the missing quarter-step makes the waltz. what want would make it a march? Just us.

DreamerSupreme 21-Aug-03/5:36 AM
ah.. ok, now i understand better.

Should consider ironing out the wrinkles though, or seeing how you could get your message across in a more clear fashion, but thats up to you.

Blessed with 8.




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