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quarter-step (abridged) (Free verse) by richa

the missing quarter-step makes the waltz. what want would make it a march? Just us.

richa 21-Aug-03/5:32 AM
what want refers to what would motivate anyone to want to change a waltz to a march. Kind of old fashioned phraseology.

the answer being a selfish want. Rock garden and resevoir are man made, nature harnessed for mans selfish needs.

That is why the wind slant on the rocks is out of kilter.

In their natural environment the rocks slant would be consistent and indicate where the weathering (like eroding) elements came from.

Hope this makes it easier to understand.




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