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quarter-step (abridged) (Free verse) by richa

the missing quarter-step makes the waltz. what want would make it a march? Just us.

DreamerSupreme 21-Aug-03/5:24 AM
what want ?? er.. perhaps a typo?..

over all the poems vague, it doesnt make much sense to me. I think you need to cook this slightly longer. I'll give my vote later.




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