ecargo20 Aug 2003

Well, I don't know why you'd have to be doing something "productive" other than sailing, but that aside:

There's good stuff here to be chiseled out. Too many modifiers. Why a "dull" permanance? How 'bout a "silent sail"? Lose "caring." Kill the ending.


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