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Census (Free verse) by dragonfly

I've heard it so many times it's become embedded in my head, rotating like a wheel. Mom was right when she said I'd never amount to much and others agreed. The census is in: "He'll never succeed."

J.B. Manning 20-Aug-03/12:55 PM
Hmmm I like the flow and message of this poem.




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