poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on A Rose by LuckyJoe.

god'swife18 Aug 2003

Ok first I love the 3rd line, not sure why yet but it has something to do with sound.

I see beauty in imperfection as well so we become members of different camps at line 2, not good.

Then it just pretty much falls apart.

"CAUSE" is not a word.

Also that last line is just Lauren Bacall in Key Largo.