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A Rose (Free verse) by LuckyJoe

A rose could say more than I could ever, All beauty be seen in perfection, A red of flawless a ray, To look within and become transparent, As you look deeper you see loves of the past, In a glance you see love yet to come, This lets you know you are not to be alone, Your soul finds happiness within, This figure of perfection withers and falls peacefully back to earth, But the message it leave; you remember: "When you need me, come find me, cause every rose I am within."

SupremeDreamer 18-Aug-03/4:52 AM
skimming the surface, using the same old metaphors, roses, ice cream.. continue to dream, my sleeping beauty, till you find that your living a nightmare.. strike out motherfucker, be original.. or atleast put a new twist to old shit..




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