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\The Moment/ (Free verse) by Son Of A Bitch

Eyes colder than the carcase of snow, The last goodbye I told her, The sunrise I sold her, Challenged me as I was about to go. She took off the ring I bought her, And spoke of the thing I taught her, The thing that controlled her, And the joy it would bring, each time I'd hold her. Now just a wished upon star, soon to be ashes. I felt fulfilled, as love spilled from a cheating, beating heart, that intensified with each tear she cried, then suddenly vanish. In love you can fly, you can live a moment you believe lasts forever, But once you fall, Like Icarus you die. So near to a dream, a clear final scream, from the man with a girl, the clam with a pearl, Take a slice of my life add it too drink, a husband and wife baby what do you think? I'd rather take the jump and fly, And live the moment before I die, But what a moment.

Shardik 17-Aug-03/11:16 AM
What exactly is a carcase of snow?




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