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Icecream Soul (Free verse) by LuckyJoe

The fluid of love; red, Slush pumping through veins, Shivers consuming body in whole, Harsh words getting colder, Freezing solid… Numbness all that’s known. Circular container sits, Frozen delight left on the counter top, Inside my soul melting ice cream, Seeping from the edges, Indulge in gluttony, Crave the sweet taste, Consume whole before melted away.

LuckyJoe 16-Aug-03/12:49 PM
Like my masterbation? I surely hope you haven't seen what mine looks like...ewww *shuts all the blinds*

What would you suggest here? You're comment didn't tell me anything other than reading the poem put food on your mind... food and sex. Strawberries anyone? hehe




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