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God is a Lady (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

She used to run with the devil But they broke ties when she got pregnant He left her messages but got no reply She was too busy raising her children To even pay her old friend a call They used to room together in college Stayed up all night, drinking and having a good time Talking bout the joys of life and professing love Now she sits alone in her climate controlled high rise apartment Surrounded by photographs of better days and kitties galore She get many calls still but enjoys other's misery I used to write her, and every now and then she'd pull a few strings for me Now she'd rather play with mine

Dan garcia-Black 14-Aug-03/10:38 PM
Ohhhh Yeah! That's what I'm talkin' bout. Rather, what you're talking about that resonates superbly. Better than a good idea. It's a good idea well presented. 10




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