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Incomplete (Free verse) by Hostileintent

Some say methinks I'm paranoid, Paranoid to fight the void, The void that sleeps,the void who hunts, The void that preys,prays never- preys never tin the morn, Because we mourn,what those who have gone before Him,have borne. For when we are born, Some,He says,must die, That invalid wound of being a being, and for the rest, The megre,insignificant and wretched, ...Our foolish...- are foolhardy puissant individuals, And precarious fob eachother off as, Whose persona is not pellucid, Forget their ignorance-through the leviathan, So is it best,not to be the best, The distinctive,innate and innocuous, But just.....Ordinary

Hostileintent 14-Aug-03/3:55 PM
yea. i put this poem in last year in a competition.got to the semi. when in school i studied the work of Gerard Manley Hopkins. i loved him,and his so many unique styles. i just took one, which as you said is, splitting the line up into two,and putting the first part last.thanks for the comments




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