poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Nyctophobia by crims0ngh0st.

nentwined16 Mar 2002

"Happiness floods over me" doesn't seem to quite say what I think you're wanting to say. Maybe "dark happiness", just to pound it in more, or... Not sure. I'd like to see more of why you fear the dark as opposed to that you are; what is wrong with having the power of the world, thoughtless currents, ...?