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Looking down (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Invisible panther paws trepidate on taut capillary threads spanning cloisonne tiled chasms that crack, break, heave inviting black cats to fall to suggestion in burning oranges, and join in the ashing of others

EAger to Offend 8-Aug-03/3:50 PM
Hey, hold on. How can the chasms be tiled? What was it before? Clay-tiled roof or something...I had the picture of decrepit shed roofs before and that really worked for me.




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