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Looking down (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Invisible panther paws trepidate on taut capillary threads spanning cloisonne tiled chasms that crack, break, heave inviting black cats to fall to suggestion in burning oranges, and join in the ashing of others

http://mulberryfairy 8-Aug-03/2:21 PM
Oh yes, much better, but it is much more vague, too, doubt I would've gotten it in its present form. But still very nice.




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