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Undertow (Haiku) by eliastemplar

turn off all the lights beneath the cold that covers your only summer

thepinkbunnyofdoom 8-Aug-03/12:26 PM
Um... Correct me if I'm wrong here but this isn't a Haiku right? I mean 5-7-5? This is 5, maybe 6, and 4. No vote from me on this one.




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