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Looking down (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Invisible panther paws trepidate on taut capillary threads spanning cloisonne tiled chasms that crack, break, heave inviting black cats to fall to suggestion in burning oranges, and join in the ashing of others

EAger to Offend 7-Aug-03/11:41 PM
Okay, I'm an idiot 'cuz I don't understand this poem in the least and yet I enjoy these images immensely. If it's not too much of a kick in the nuts, could you please give me a clue about those last four lines?

Reserving my vote. I'm glad I didn't read the version with "indecent proposal" in it.




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