Retaliate7 Aug 2003

Very nice richa.

E-minor is a chord, by the way, which would take multiple instruments to hear.

This is unfortunate because the poem really enjoys having a solitary instrument, but also benefits from recognizing specifically an e-minor feel.

Perhaps:
'and picking from the still air
a dorian scent of trombone'

(Dorian is a mode that has a minoresque feel to it and can be played with a series of notes on a single instrument.)