poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on blue lilac and I (edit) by richa.

http://mulberryfairy7 Aug 2003

Great. But yeah, like INTRANSIT said, the trombone? The trombone is such a circus instrument, makes it seem like this moment is going on in the background of a cakewalk. Is that what you are going for? The tone doesn't seem so jolly as to call for a trombone solo. That is my only complaint, 10.