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My Fart Is Eternally Yours (Free Sniff) By Yo-Yo (Free verse) by DreamerSupreme

I fell upon a cactus last night Like a mailman falls upon a lake laced with LSD & PCP We've been living in a shopping cart for so long now Of course thats true if you don't peek in on my masturbation sessions Or pay a visit to my personal sausage beater With seats molded from blue cheese And a stage made by mushroom pixies Where I publicly shove my thumb in my bum And the audience passes out like falling stars As they did encounter the stench Sniffing the aroma over and over Again

Joe-joe 7-Aug-03/1:14 PM
Yo Dreamster,

I did not give you a zero. I actually thought your work had a bit of wit to it. I really don't mind. I find you amusing. No doubt you're a punk who couldn't stand up face to face with a man like me, but thats OK. We all have to deal with things from a place of comfort. As for me "falling into your trap" I've been around the corner more times than you can count. I'll take this little game as far as I'd like...when I'm no longer amused I'll stop playing. Peace my witty but crude little brother




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