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Angel (Free verse) by abecedarian

a completely dark infinity interrupted by a brilliant light an angel with a face so pure and beautiful that I could not see it white glowing skin and thin fragile limbs impossibly strong as she grabbed my hand and I followed The darkness sensed a gap the place where her glowing legs could not meet and prevent the darkness from entering and violating in fear she whirled to face me wings streaming a circle behind her and pulled me close so that I could keep the darkness out

http://mulberryfairy 6-Aug-03/5:14 PM
Shardik, I do believe that zero was undeserved, if you reread, you will see that Abe C.'s narrator actually intervened on behalf of the alien angel.




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