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Angel (Free verse) by abecedarian

a completely dark infinity interrupted by a brilliant light an angel with a face so pure and beautiful that I could not see it white glowing skin and thin fragile limbs impossibly strong as she grabbed my hand and I followed The darkness sensed a gap the place where her glowing legs could not meet and prevent the darkness from entering and violating in fear she whirled to face me wings streaming a circle behind her and pulled me close so that I could keep the darkness out

cleverdevice 6-Aug-03/1:45 PM
Bit vague, and lack of capital letters marks it down, some nice imagery though. -6-




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