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He's Dead You Bastards (for zzinia) (Pimple) by scitz

He didn’t deserve to die, But I guess that Angels must fly, He was my friend since I was seven, Now he watches down on me from heaven. I knew he was sad but thought he’d make it, But I guess I was wrong he just couldn’t take it, All the shit no one understands, My hearts held together by elastic bands, And all because love kills, Which is why he swallowed 50 pills, He went to sleep to escape pain, No sun in his life just black wet rain. His girlfriend left him for some guy who could drive, If he’d just passed his test he’d still be alive, But the bitch looked good in a Porsche 921, I hope your pleased now because he’s gone, If I see her around I’ll kill the bitch, And hide her used up body in a ditch, But that won’t bring him back, And nights seem long and black, Why the fuck don’t I just do it? No one would care they’d just say I blew it, At least that way I’d be making a statement, That people are cruel, selfish and blatant, Everyone would love me and think I’m so cool, That I don’t give a shit about no fucking rule, And at least I’ll be free away from this shit, Goodbye you bastards this is it.

scitz 5-Aug-03/8:29 AM
God I must be slipping that took 5 mins to do and I'm welling up.




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