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Joe is Dead Now (Free verse) by Freethinker1602

That smile meant so much to me The way you smiled comforted me My hand seemed to fit so perfectly in yours Now the only thing I'll see of you Is a tiny picture I'll keep close Close to my heart I won't believe that you are gone It's too much to accept Because we'd planned forever You knew who I was I loved you and now I can't say it I love you and now that I know what tomorrow brings I'll remember you Forever and think about Who you were every day Stay close to me Joe And I'll never forget you jmv

sk8rs_rule_all 5-Aug-03/6:58 AM
Wow...I had a bf named joe, and i hated him very muhc but now i have learned to accept waht he did to me and now we are just friends, this poem is great. Im not only giving it a 10 bcuz i had an ex- named joe but even if i hadent had an ex- named joe i'd still give it a 10 bcuz it has a light to it that i cant explain




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