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I wanna die (Pimple) by scitz

I want to join the Angels above, Because in heaven at least I’ve a chance to be loved. I cut myself to release the pain, Why did you leave me to go insane? We were good you and I, And now you’ve gone I want to cry, But my eyes have cried dry, I’m as lonely as the sun in a grey sky. You fucking bitch I wish you’d die. Nobody knows how I feel, I’ve lost my appetite and can’t even eat my favorite meal. But I’ll get my revenge on you, you fucking slut, You’ll be sorry when my wrists have been cut, And then my pain will be no more, Since the day you walked out my door, So while I die bitch, I’ll be watching you cry bitch, And you’ll be sorry, For losing me.

scitz 5-Aug-03/6:54 AM
Z
I will wear this dishonourable crown with pride. I recently attended a student poetry evening filled with train spotters and ugly teens with yellowheads on the brink of explosion. There was a young lad called 'Malcolm Spurgeon' who started crying as he read 'The Destruction Of Me' at the end a posse of girls (who were crying) asked him to write one for them about there experiences. By the end of the night he had snogged the lot of them and thought he was a God at poetry. I must admit to having a soft spot for Malcolm for his sheer incompetence and bravado he had a taste at the big time.

I may enter next week once I have eaten lots of high cholestrol foods to make me look the part, what do you think Z?

shall i go for it?




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