<~>4 Aug 2003

luckyjoe-
this is poorly written, and entertaining in a pre-teen, wow SEX! kind of way. you give everything away; you give nothing away, and you do it without skill. i suspect you plan on beoming a teacher, since you gave us a list of reading-comprhension questions at the end.

insteadof being impressed by your misguided sense of your own cleverness, may i humbly suggest you study the english language?

that is all.